Once gain very well written...when we are angry, we are blind to reality, specially when our mind & emotions r out of our control so its better to keep silent during tht tym...
Of course this poem is outstanding but it looks more with background image specially black sign board and babies pic in the end beautifully designed by you friend and written by your sis
Shweta whether you are writing it in free time or professionally; all I want to say it keep going you are a good writer. You know very well how to drag out your feelings or thoughts. For me it's a well structured poem. May "Soumya" 'Shri Ram' bless you and fill you with Joy dear little sis :)
I am fully agree with others its a well structured poem. Guys click on the image and read it in black background really you will feel like you are on Silent Hill :P
Developing a positive relationship with a reader is very vital for a poet because they have to communicate their concepts & emotions through poems and I think somehow you've managed it well done!
"For some wounds, some cuts never healed, got engraved in the heart and sealed..... SO TRUE! Shweta its too good poem and thanks ankit for sharing it.... I'm looking forward to your poems shweta...
Sometimes silent speaks so much than words its good to be silent rather than speaking like crazy man.... In the end baby looks so cute and hey you matched it so well tht black sign board, picture, baby pic everything is just right in the line
Sahi baat farmayi sabhi batein ek dam sahi hai jab bhi aesi situation ho to khuda ke pass baithkar sab kuch bhul kar shant mann se unhe yaad karna chahiye mann ko sukun milega
Wah dil khush kar ditta shwetaji sat sri akal ki haal hai jee? Rab di maher bani rahe rab rakha ji... praaji ek gal daso menu ye designing vesigning kyun nahi sikhate? mein sikhna chavangi
Be silent is the best policy specially when you are shattered or angry. You can think more wisely, realize the real thing which you can't do as being aggressive.
This is exactly what I was thinking before I read it.. Nice creativity My Best Friend I'll take idea from this graphic for my upcoming project ;) a bunch of thanks for you my dearest friend
Today I'm an independent girl and a successful leader in my company & it wasn't possible if you are not with me during hard times. I'll always cherish our memories and they will live in my heart forever. Thank you shweta dear for reminding me of my old days. I wish you a good luck and may god bless you. And, I hope you both always stay as a friends forever
I am grateful to all of you for reading it. thanks for the beautiful words. sure thing i'll keep writing. and bhaiya thank so much for doing this. its the best gift for me
I appreciate the efforts and the talent of you both. I especially appreciate My Love poem. Please, do inform me whenever this blog gets update because I would love to read and share them
ankit i'm following you on sites and blogs since many years but till now i've never seen something like this. this one is better among all brilliant designing from starting to end and poems Masha Allah no words i'm speechless
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53 comments:
Once gain very well written...when we are angry, we are blind to reality, specially when our mind & emotions r out of our control so its better to keep silent during tht tym...
Its better to keep silent rather than involving in an argument
Of course this poem is outstanding but it looks more with background image specially black sign board and babies pic in the end beautifully designed by you friend and written by your sis
Shweta whether you are writing it in free time or professionally; all I want to say it keep going you are a good writer. You know very well how to drag out your feelings or thoughts. For me it's a well structured poem. May "Soumya" 'Shri Ram' bless you and fill you with Joy dear little sis :)
I am fully agree with others its a well structured poem. Guys click on the image and read it in black background really you will feel like you are on Silent Hill :P
I loved it
nice poem and graphic... good job by both of you
Its just like what I wanna read after seeing the title... meaningful poem
Developing a positive relationship with a reader is very vital for a poet because they have to communicate their concepts & emotions through poems and I think somehow you've managed it well done!
That cute boy looks so serene lovely... cool creation bhai... Shweta di's writing is almost invariably beyond fantasy
"For some wounds, some cuts never healed, got engraved in the heart and sealed..... SO TRUE! Shweta its too good poem and thanks ankit for sharing it.... I'm looking forward to your poems shweta...
Sometimes silent speaks so much than words its good to be silent rather than speaking like crazy man.... In the end baby looks so cute and hey you matched it so well tht black sign board, picture, baby pic everything is just right in the line
Unique piece....di u r a nice writer and Ankit my best friend what to say yaar we all know u r a gr8 gr8 designer...di ur all d poems got a nice touch
Sahi baat farmayi sabhi batein ek dam sahi hai jab bhi aesi situation ho to khuda ke pass baithkar sab kuch bhul kar shant mann se unhe yaad karna chahiye mann ko sukun milega
Exactly like my meditation lecture hey I mean its effective
Wah dil khush kar ditta shwetaji sat sri akal ki haal hai jee? Rab di maher bani rahe rab rakha ji... praaji ek gal daso menu ye designing vesigning kyun nahi sikhate? mein sikhna chavangi
"SILENCE" is a source of GREAT STRENGTH"
sirf 2-3 lines ki kami hey warna Quran ki yaad aa jati maula aap dono ko khush rakhey
Be silent is the best policy specially when you are shattered or angry. You can think more wisely, realize the real thing which you can't do as being aggressive.
So perfect
Thanks Ankit for sharing yet one more interesting poem.
Your poetry is so meaningful nd beautiful
Really its nice
Exactly! Great thought.... very well written... Keep it up author... God Bless you
All the sentences are perfect and in line brilliant work
This is exactly what I was thinking before I read it.. Nice creativity My Best Friend I'll take idea from this graphic for my upcoming project ;) a bunch of thanks for you my dearest friend
Beautifully described
The key to "be silent" is beautifully described
Poem and Picture; I love them both! <3
Thanks for sharing....It's nice....Hugs :)
So perfect
Silence makes me strong I like dis
Nice lines very good
Hey Shweta di you certainly are the best
Amuk lines vachine hu mara past ma jti rhi beautifully described
Today I'm an independent girl and a successful leader in my company & it wasn't possible if you are not with me during hard times. I'll always cherish our memories and they will live in my heart forever. Thank you shweta dear for reminding me of my old days. I wish you a good luck and may god bless you. And, I hope you both always stay as a friends forever
AGREE
Wow how wonderful
True for sure
This is perfect love it.... Thanks Ankit for inviting me to read this blog
Well said madam and great designing ankit sir
Meaningful, true and interesting yet something is missing regarding GOD. Improve it didi next time
Damn true
Nice graphic with nice lines good job by bro and sis.... Keep it up
Smile and Silence are the best combination of the world and one who understands it never feels bad
I am grateful to all of you for reading it. thanks for the beautiful words. sure thing i'll keep writing. and bhaiya thank so much for doing this. its the best gift for me
Awesome !! One of the deepest poems I have ever read
Beautifully written and designed
જીવનના અનેક સારમાંનો એક સાર.. :) very well written :)
A short summary of life... bro nice pic in d end
I appreciate the efforts and the talent of you both. I especially appreciate My Love poem. Please, do inform me whenever this blog gets update because I would love to read and share them
ankit i'm following you on sites and blogs since many years but till now i've never seen something like this. this one is better among all brilliant designing from starting to end and poems Masha Allah no words i'm speechless
Overall its really great effort but staying in silent mode always isn't a good thing specially when you are getting hurt again n again
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